(Ruaumoko and the Earthquake)
Yesterday on Tuesday,we have just introduced to our Ako evening or production to the whole school and we start from Fiji to New Zealand.Last night in the evening at school,we just started the production at 4:30 pm to our parents.
I was in the New Zealand group and our production is called Ruaumoko and the Earthquake.We start performing our dance moves and we start doing our play in front of the class.
And finally,we explained to our classmates about the history of the earthquake here in New Zealand.And there you have it again guys,this our production here in New Zealand called Ruaumoko and the Earthquake.Thank you!!!
Hi David I like how you were putting punctuation into your writing but you need to work on putting your paragraph.
ReplyDeleteHi David,Me Amon
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used a picture that relates to the god you were talking about,but maybe be more specific with your sentences just talking about this line. We start performing our dance moves and we start doing our play in front of the class
What class are you performing to?
otherwise Keep up the good work.
hey David I like your picture that you put in your blog post but the thing that you have to work on have more long paragraph in your writing
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